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Wednesday, June 20, 2012

Aamchi Mumbai (Gamraj)

 I narrated this plot along with few other ideas in RC Gen-Next Writers Meet (January 2008). Posted on RC Forums and website also...


Aamchi Mumbai

United Nations (U.N.) duniya kay pramukh sheharo kay safety, crime, tourism, trade, transport, ko aadhar bana kar unn sheharo ki rating kar rahi thi. Ye international rating baad mey poori duniya ko tourism aur trade kay liye sabse favorable cities ki list dene waali thi jiske anusaar bahut se desh apne nagriko aur vyapario ko bhavishya kay liye disha nirdesh dene waale thay. Sabhi cities kay crime records, trade, transport aur tourism ki volume ka U.N. kay adhikariyon dwara hisaab rakha jaa raa tha. Mumbai bhi unn cities mey chuna gaya tha.

Issi beech Mumbai mey apradh badhne lage thay. Saath hi Mumbai kay mukhya Bandargaaho, Airports, Railway Stations, etc, par aaye din koi naa koi gadbadi ho rahi thi.

Jaise kabhi achanak bhaari sankhya mey kisi videshi prajati kay endangered pakshiyon ka airport par aa jaana. Ya phir samudri ships ka apne aap coast ki taraf badh jaana aur paas ki bastiyon mey ghus jaana. Ya phir official crime record badhane kay liye tourist ban kar aaye videshi khufia agents ki jhooti shikayatein. Gamraj inn apradho ko rookne ki jee todd kosish karta hai. Uski pakad mey kai videshi agents aate hai jo chahte thay ki Mumbai mey kum trade aur tourism ho taaki U.N. ki best city ki daud se naa sirf Mumbai bahar ho jaaye balki sabhi cities kay muqable sabse last aakar ek international joke ban ka reh jaaye. Iss baat ka Gamraj ko kaafi baad (mahiney kay aakhir) mey pata chalta hai.

Mahiney kay aakhri din tak Gamraj videsho dwara karvaye jaa rahe apradho ki rook thaam mey laga raha. Gamraj ko pata chalta hai ki ye videshi chaal kaamyab honay waali hai aur Mumbai baaki sabhi shehro se kaafi peeche chhut gaya hai.

Gamraj bhi "cheating ka badla cheating se dene ki sochta hai". Wo uss mahiney kay aakhri aadhe ghantey mey Bandargaaho, Airports, etc, mey 'Superduper Sonic' multipurpose Yamunda ki madad se naa sirf mahiney ka saara ruka hua trade aur transport poora karva deta hai saath hi agle mahiney ki bhi kaafi advance trading kar deta hai.

Phir Gamraj peechle dino shehar mey huey apradho kay liye U.N. kay adhikariyon kay saamne pakde gaye videshi nagriko ko sabooto kay saath pesh karta hai. U.N. kay saamne 1 mahiney se Mumbai mey ho rahi gadbadiyon ka sach khul jaata hai.

Gamraj kay 'eleventh hour' (aakhri samay) par kiye gaye efforts ki wajah se Mumbai ka revenue sabse zyada hota hai aur Mumbai ko best city ka khitaab milta hai.

Aur U.N. ki report mey likha jaata hai ki "Gamraj aur Yamunda kay rehte Mumbai hi best rahega."


The End!

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